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先看一下我的情况吧:
1.unconditional offer of msc in environmental engineering
2.toefl 620
3.15w,2002.11;6w,2003.6,10w,2003.6
4.我叔叔担保
5.去年毕业,无工作
说实话,去签以前,我认为拒签率为70%.我叔叔开了个小公司,没有红头信纸,随便打了一个收入证明.年收入8万.所有的钱都是一次性存入,我签的是诺丁汉.
今天签证形势很好。大概有80%.13号签证官.进去之后就发现签证官一个人.没有发现翻译mm.根本就没有给我说汉语的机会.不过我也不想用它.下面是我俩全部的对话:
study plan?
12months.master degree of environmental engineering
where to study?
university of nottingham
what certificatee do you hold?
bachelor of engineering
how much money do you prepare?
31w. rmb
conditional or unconditional?
unconditional
下面签证哥们说了一句让我难以置信的话:
would you like to take your passport this afternoon?
赶紧说:yeah!yeah! thank you!
拿白条,走人.
3分钟搞定,还没回过来味呢!
就看了存单原件,其余都没看.
大家研究研究,希望我的案例对大家有帮助.
还有,给了我两年的有效期.
祝大家好运!
我觉得获签的一个很重要的原因是两个东东:study plan
说明我对到那里上学的渴望和热情;personal statement
重点解释我的资金问题和所有的付出.签证官也是人吗,
也会感动的.万不得已,剑走偏锋!认真的准备自己的材料吧, 我都能过.
Study Plan
Name of the applicant: Yongjun Zhang
University at which I will study: University of Nottingham
Courses: MSc in Environmental Engineering
Expected course length: 12 months
Tuition fees:£10500
Estimated living expenses: £6,500
My financial guarantee: My uncle
Total amount of my funds: RMB 310000≈£22900
Why did I choose UK to study?
First, the UK education holds a great international reputation of high quality. Second, I can obtain a master degree in a year. It will save me a lot of time. Third, UK has brilliant culture and long history. It can help me to know more about west civilizations as well as advanced technologies.
Why did I choose the University of Nottingham?
Frankly speaking, that wasn’t my fist choice. According to my conditions, I applied for three universities: Imperil College of Science, Technology and Medicine, the University of Nottingham, and the University of Newcastle upon Tyne and received offers of the latter two. After careful consideration, I chose the University of Nottingham due to its greater reputation and more attracting course structure. I believe it will equip me with advanced technologies in environmental protection.
My course structure:
The Course structure is based around four key areas of Environmental Engineering.
2 Resource Management: Ground, Water, Air, Energy
2 Waste treatment and disposal: Solids, Liquid, Gases
2 Environmental Assessment: Environmental Law, Impact Assessment
2 Environmental Monitoring: Physical Monitoring, Design, Sampling, Data Analysis
My future plan:
After finishing my studies in UK, I will come back to Beijing and find a position in an outstanding environmental protection company, such as Beijing Commercial Sky Environment Protection Co.,Ltd, Tsinghua Novel E&E Environmental Protection Co., Ltd. When I have enough experience, I will establish my own company. I believe what I will have learnt in UK will make my future more satisfying.
Personal Statement
Name of the applicant: Yongjun Zhang
Why does my uncle want to support me?
We really made a very good relationship. As a child, I began to receive my uncle’s special care. He often bought me toys and food. Till now, I still remember his mighty hands that sent me happiness. When I was a college student, my uncle always encouraged me to study abroad and would afford all fees. Now he does give me enough financial supporting.
Thought about the future study:
It will be very busy for a postgraduate to finish all courses in a year, of course, if one really wants to learn something. With the aim of studying advanced technologies, not others, I must spend all the time to study and prepare enough funds. If I haven’t got well financial preparation, it will waste the time in UK and I can’t get anything.
What have I done for the study?
In last two years at university, I never enjoy a weekend. After finishing required assignment I spent the rest time on English and environmental
magazines in library. I gave up the entrance exam of graduate school, although it was not difficult for me. After graduation, it took all of my time to read environmental books of English version. What I have done in the past three years is for perfect preparation which will make time in UK going efficiently. Now I am ready and don’t want to see the three-year preparation gone.
从我的经历来看,study plan
是很重要的,虽然不是必须的,但它能使VO对你有一个大概的了解。况且有一些东西,面谈的时候根本就说不出来,也没机会说。personal statement 可以帮助你解释一些令人疑问的地方。比如我的担保问题。另外我还写了自己为留学而牺牲了很多东西,让VO了解签证对我的重要性。
祝大家好运!
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