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However as you know there are still times when ink on paper is essential. Many of the so-called professions (legal, accountancy, etc) in the UK at least still insist on correspondence being done via printed letters. They have a deep mistrust of email and for good reason, as its confidentiality can never be guaranteed. Business letters are at least fairly private you have to assume its easier and faster to snoop on email than it is to steam envelopes open over boiling water.In other instances, too, printed letters provide a more tamper-proof formal record of business arrangements, complaints, employee warnings/terminations and other issues that need to be carved into tablets of stone. (Well, paper, anyway.)Old fashioned structure, modern styleHighlighted and ridiculed by the casual nature of email, the quaint formality of the old fashioned business letter seems positively Dickensian and totally inappropriate for the way we do business now. There is an answer, though. Use the formality of structure that makes the business letter the bullet-proof form of communication it has come to be. Combine that with the short, straight-talking style of writing more common to emails, and you have a good compromise.Lets start with the structure or rather, the etiquette which supplies the structure. There are variations between accepted etiquette used in the different English language markets. Here are the main British forms of address. I have also included the US/Canadian equivalents where I know them, but Im afraid Im not aware of those used in Australia, NZ or SA. Formal lettersThe addressee will either be a title, e.g. The Chief Executive Officer or to an organization or company when you dont know to whom your letter should be addressed. When you write to a title the salutation is Dear Sir, Dear Madam, or if you want to play it safe, Dear Sir/Madam. When you write to an organization its Dear Sirs, Dear Mesdames, or again if you want to play it safe (but labor the point) Dear Sirs/Mesdames.Your sign off will be Yours faithfully (UK) or Yours truly (US and Canada.)Less formal lettersThis is where you have a name. And this is where you can get into hot water if youre not sure of the gender of the person. Someone called J C Jennings could be a Jack or a Joanna. Someone called Leslie Matthews could also be either (traditionally the female version of the name is spelled Lesley and the male Leslie, but I know at least one lady Leslie.) Equally beware of unisex names like Jody, Jo, Bobbie, Alex, Rob, Robin, Carol (yes, really,) Billie, Chris, Darryl, Eddie, Sam, Jackie, Nicky, Frances (f) vs Francis (m), Freddie, Gabrielle (f) vs Gabriel (m), Georgie, Gerry/Jerry, Charlie, Nat, Harry, Jessie (f) vs Jesse (m), Stevie, Mel, Pat, Ronnie, Sacha, Sandy, etc. And thats before we get started on names from non English-language cultures. People these days usually dont advertise whether theyre Mr or Ms or whatever. When in doubt dont risk embarrassment; phone the organization concerned and ask. Some people borrow an awful technique from email and use a persons whole name in the salutation, e.g. Dear Suzan St Maur. I dont know about you, but this irritates the h*ll out of me and I would not recommend it.So, when your letter is addressed to Mr J C Jennings your salutation is Dear Mr Jennings. If the information you have is simply Joanna C Jennings you can probably take a chance and write a salutation of Dear Ms Jennings. I dont know many male Joannas, but dont count on it... Your sign off will be Yours sincerely.Even less formal lettersThis is where the internets influence can be allowed to come into it and give you some freedom from the formalities expected in, well, more formal letters.If youre writing to someone whom you know on first name terms then your salutation is going to be Dear (name) and you dont need to sign off with a yours anything unless you particularly want to. Common forms of sign off include warm regards (US,) kind regards, best wishes, etc. LayoutThis isnt as strictly followed as it used to be, and now its considered OK to design the layout of a letter around the design of the company letterhead. The elements you need, wherever you put them, should include:*Your company name and address (usually done in the letterheads design)*The date*The addressees name, title, company name and address*The salutation (dear so-and-so)*The topic of the letter (re: whatever)*The body of the letter*The sign off (Yours whatever)*Your own name and titleTraditionally, your own address should go at the top right of the letter, with the date underneath it on the right. On the next line at the left margin, you put the addressees name and address. After one or two spaces, the Dear (whoever) goes underneath that. Two spaces below that, you can put your re: (topic) or just the topic in bold and/or underlined.Once youve done the body of the letter, create one or two spaces and put the sign-off either ranged left or indented a few tabs along towards the right. Create a sufficient number of spaces for your signature and then key in your name (and title if appropriate) so it starts directly under the Y of Yours.If your letter goes on to a second page, where it breaks on page 1 create a space then to the right key in contd. You can start page 2 just by keying in page 2 and starting again two or three spaces below. Some people create a mini-heading for the second page with the addressees name on the left, the date in the middle, and the page number on the right, followed by an underline that crosses the whole page. This is useful if the two pages become detached from one another. Okay. Now weve established the ground rules, what do we say?Keep the style sharp and simpleBusiness letters are not literary works. They are verbal workhorses with a purpose only to convey information, and what you want the reader to do with it, as quickly and clearly as possible.Start by making notes as if to yourself. These notes will come out in a direct style naturally, because youre not intimidated or disquieted when writing to yourself. Dont restrict yourself to a structure at this stage. Just write out everything you can think of that should go into the letter.Now, match your notes to the sequence in one of the skeletons described below. Discard any notes that arent relevant.If you build up your letter along these lines youll find that your style is clear and straightforward, with no unnecessary adjectives, adverbs, business phrases, corporate speak or other business BS that some people use in business letters. All you need to do then is tidy up with a good edit and spelling and grammar check. (Although many people take a lenient view over spelling and grammatical mistakes in emails, they stick out like sore thumbs in printed letters and make you look very amateurish.)Build your content on a skeleton Normally youll identify the topic of the letter with re: Your Outstanding Account or less formally, Your Outstanding Account in bold and/or underlined. Then make notes or bullet points of the main issues you need to include, on a skeleton like this:Typically, these would be:1. BackgroundI see from our records that you were first invoiced for this amount four months ago and statements have been sent out to you each month since then2. The sticky issueThis cant go on, especially as you havent contacted us to discuss extending your credit3. What I want to happen now Pay up in the next seven days4. Or elseWe will be obliged to start legal proceedings against you5. SweetenerIf you do pay up by return, we wont take any further action and will restart your 30 days credit as before6. Next movePlease contact me urgently and let me know what you intend to doSame skeleton, different contentYou could use this skeleton for a number of business letter purposes. Not all business letters have you sitting so comfortably in the driving seat, however. Lets say you were the recipient of this letter and want to winkle out more time to pay. The elements remain the same, but we approach from a different angle...1. BackgroundThank you for bringing this to my attention I had no idea we were so late paying2. The sticky issueWere experiencing serious cashflow problems at the moment but we have taken steps to rectify this and anticipate the problem will be solved in the next 3 weeks3. What I want to happen nowWould you consider extending our credit for a while longer, perhaps with interest being chargeable at a rate we can agree?4. Or elseWe really would like to continue buying our supplies from you but if we enter into a dispute the goodwill will be lost and our business relationship will be over5. SweetenerI can assure you our cashflow problem is temporary and we want to preserve our business relationship with you if possible6. Next moveI will phone you in the next few days to discuss payment termsBuild your own skeletonObviously that 6-point skeleton isnt going to work for every business letter, but a shortened version of it will be useful because you can build it back up so its tailored to any number of different needs. Heres the basic one that I use:1. Background2. The key issue3. What will or should happen4. What to do nextAny further tips? Only that business letters should always be as short as possible. Thats not as simple as it sounds. Somebody famous (cant remember who) once apologized for writing someone a long letter, as he didnt have time to write a short one. Its hard to write concisely, but if you use the style and skeleton tips above youll find it somewhat easier.If you need to go into detail, separate that off into a different (but attached) document and use the letter only as a summary of the issue and a call to action. Im no social psychologist so I cant quote you a scientific reason, but separating detail from key points usually means that both get read more thoroughly. Its probably because by separating the two elements you provide readers with more digestible looking chunks. Anyway, it works!
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